托福作文 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents

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  WritersForMe 组长 楼主 2019-09-11 21:38:53

  Lin Qiu September 3, 2019 at 2:55 am Score: 72.9 Please revise your essay based on the following, and then resubmit your essay. Shorten your essay to 320- words. I will send you the screenshot via WeChat in relation to your essay problems. Regards, Lin Qiu

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  WritersForMe 组长 楼主 2019-09-11 21:39:05

  wendyliu University: TUC Nationality: China September 3, 2019 at 2:51 pm TOEFL Essay TOPIC: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Version II We all agree that parents are the first teachers we have got. They taught us to walk and talk when we were infants. Parents, without doubt, are one of the most indispensable teachers in one’s life, but are they the best teachers? I mean, everyone in his life will encounter dozens of teachers. Some of them are fantastic, yet some fail to fulfill their duties properly. There is no reason that one’s first teachers are the best teachers one can get. Some parents are not even good people, so how can they be the best teachers? A couple need no training or examines to be parents, so we cannot guarantee their qualification as parents, and thus leave alone the possibility for those underqualified parents to be their children’s best teachers. I heard that in some remote place a father taught his 2-year-old young boy to smoke, and a pair of parents told their primary school child to fight and hurt his classmates. For this kind of people, parenting is the last thing in the world they deserve. Unfairly, however, any couple can be parents by giving birth to a baby. Some parents meet the preconditions to be good parents and some are even excellent professional teachers, though, raising a child can still be a tough challenge. This is because parents who pursue a self-fulfilling life or successful career, despite their individual excellence, often cannot take good care of their children. Parenting is a quite demanding job. Nearly all of the parents have their regrets for failing to better fulfill their parenting job. Only painstaking and self-sacrificing parents have an opportunity to be the best teachers; they must have a strong spirit, positive attitude, and willingness to sacrifice their life after work and even their career to company their kids; their fair personalities set good examples for their children. Therefore, these parents, beyond doubt, are the best teachers to their children.

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  WritersForMe 组长 楼主 2019-09-11 21:39:16

  Lin Qiu September 3, 2019 at 8:13 pm Score: 72 I will get back to you shortly. Regards, Lin Qiu

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  WritersForMe 组长 楼主 2019-09-11 21:40:00

  Lin Qiu September 4, 2019 at 2:27 am Final Revision https://personalstatement101.com/do-you-agree-or-disagree-with-the-following-statement-parents-are-the-best-teachers-use-specific-reasons-and-examples-to-support-your-answer/

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  WritersForMe 组长 楼主 2019-09-11 21:40:13

  wendyliu University: TUC Nationality: China September 4, 2019 at 5:20 am TOEFL Essay TOPIC: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Version III We all agree that our parents were the first teachers we had. They taught us to walk and talk when we were infants. Parents, without doubt, are true of the most indispensable teachers in one’s life, but are they the best teachers? I mean, everyone in his/her lifetime will encounter dozens of teachers. Some of them are fantastic, yet some fail to fulfill their duties properly. There is no reason that one’s first teachers are absolutely the best teachers. Some parents are not even good people, so how can they be the best teachers? A couple needs no training or examinations to become parents, so we cannot guarantee their qualification as parents, and thus leave open the possibility that those underqualified parents could possibly become their children’s best teachers. I heard that in some remote place a father taught his 2-year-old son to smoke, and a pair of parents told their primary school child to fight and hurt his classmates. For this kind of people, parenting is the last thing in the world they deserve. Unfairly, however, any couple can become parents by giving birth to a baby. Some parents meet the preconditions to be good parents, and some are even excellent professional teachers though raising a child can still be a tough challenge. This is because parents who pursue a self-fulfilling life or a successful career, despite their individual excellence, often cannot take good care of their children. Parenting is a quite demanding task. Nearly all of the parents have their regrets for failing to better fulfill their parental responsibility. Only painstaking and self-sacrificing parents have an opportunity to be the best teachers. They must have a strong spirit, positive attitude, and willingness to sacrifice their life after work and even their career to accompany their kids. Their fair personalities set good examples for their children. Therefore, these parents, beyond doubt, are the best teachers for their children.

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  WritersForMe 组长 楼主 2019-09-11 21:40:23

  Lin Qiu September 4, 2019 at 2:55 pm FINAL REVISION We all agree that our parents were the first teachers we had. They taught us to walk and talk when we were infants. Parents, without doubt, are two of the most indispensable teachers in one’s life, but are they the best teachers? I mean, everyone in his or her lifetime will encounter dozens of teachers. Some of them are fantastic, yet some fail to fulfill their duties properly. There is no reason why one’s first teachers are the best teachers one can get. Some parents are not even good people, so how can they be the best teachers? A couple needs no training or examinations to become parents, so we cannot guarantee their qualification as parents, and thus leave open the possibility that those underqualified parents could possibly be their children’s best teachers. I heard that in some remote place a father taught his 2-year-old son to smoke, and a pair of parents told their primary school child to fight and hurt his classmates. For this kind of people, parenting is the last thing in the world they deserve. Unfairly, however, any couple can become parents by giving birth to a baby. Some parents meet the preconditions to be good parents and some are even excellent professional teachers, though, raising a child can still be a tough challenge. This is because parents who pursue a self-fulfilling life or successful career, despite their individual excellence, often cannot take good care of their children. Parenting is a quite demanding job. Nearly all of the parents have their regrets for failing to better fulfill their parental responsibilities. Only painstaking and self-sacrificing parents have an opportunity to be the best teachers; they must have a strong spirit, positive attitude, and willingness to sacrifice their life after work and even their career to accompany their kids; their fair personalities set good examples for their children. Therefore, these parents, beyond doubt, are the best teachers for their children.

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