诗集(2014年度 / 风箱残页系列)上
外文诗……其实一开始考虑好多,排比对仗、押韵脚什么的,后来表意居多,而且好多地方不是英文
风箱残页 Null Masue the Atonwind
作者:kotori426氏
I am Masue the Atonwind,
named after a gust of Wind from Ancient,
elder than the Antarctic Wind.
I am the Son of Liberty,
but blessed under Miracle and Azreal,
ignored by Freedom.
Then, the Son of the Miracle baptized me and said:
The white Bear from North Welkin Glacier is your Guard.
The pale Wolves from North Ice Sheet are your Claw.
The silver Fox from North Shadow Forest agreed to be your Guide.
Then, the Wing of Azreal covered me and said:
Let the Greatest Death of all forget where are you, now and then, here and there.
Let the Only Almighty of all forget Who you are, and What are you.
Let the Paramount Justice of all forget any good from you, so as evil.
风箱残页 Eins
作者:kotori426氏
Into the deep of winter,
time was frozen and struggling for spring,
however someone is needed to help this out.
So wake the Kin up,
second son of sun.
Morning mist sprinkle to grab the shadow of moon,
pale fire flickering to stay hunter's dream.
Rhode from the middle land show his disagree,
this naysayer says:
how can a second son got the bless of our sacred pure devine,
he may murder his brother, yes, he will.
So wake the Kin up,
in the name of our holy diety,
he shall covered with fleur-de-lis et angelos,
he shall be blessed with deus ex machina,
he shall long live in the auld lane syne,
such ineffable,
so wonderful,
much promising,
many glourious.
Aaron the grand and the first priest show his pros,
aye, this agent of god belive this is the high time to open an enlightened era.
...
...
Saharie Natsurita.
When season rotate, wind brings greetings, birdie carries gift.
I come from the future, thou remembered me up of past, soak into euphoria is second to omega.
...
...
Into the war, into the epic.
The man with a ring on his finger rise to protest, he is known as the dragon slayer from northland,
how dare you libel our belief, you nasty hectic shalt die seventy-seven times,
Das Nidelungenlied and their troops won't let you go.
Then the Tepes let 500 people die,
then the Tepes let 20,000 people die.
Me, the first son of Vald the dragon, shall fight you to death.
Our allies is under siege, troops should be mobilize!
Khan Jangar, King Gassar and Hero Manas, three of Harlon from North of Eastland ride there troops, strongest in the world, to fight.
Roland waive his Durandal, though he shall fight with enemy more than ten times of his and fall.
El Cid the Lord Protector stand back of him, though he shall get an arrow and fall.
Jeanne d'Arc is brave and unstoppable, though she shall sentense to death and fall.
...
...
有一天去沃尔玛的路上想到的……不过只能回忆起一小部分。不过既然这个系列都叫风箱残页了,没写完应该没什么问题吧= =毕竟写一半跑题了。
大意是世道混乱,下一个时代亟待来临,所以让Kin醒来吧,因为是次子,所以是小王Kin(g),如果写成Regios会不会太……虽然已经非常那啥了。
于是来自中土的Rhode表示反对,次子接收神的祝福什么的,会让人想起亚伯与该隐嘛。
后面的fleur-de-lis之类的是罗列法语、拉丁语和苏格兰语……表现友方势力,与第二部分对应。
然后Aaron是旧约里的第一任祭祀了,换句话说是代行者,但是旧约毕竟是美索不达米亚地区的神话,原型是Baal神,所以只是地区战争的引线。
第二部分首先是德国的尼伯龙根,屠龙者,异教徒斩杀七十个七次是套用耶稣的话了,因为原谅人要原谅70个7次,无法原谅的话就杀。
Tepes是罗马尼亚的Vald公,认为他是英雄的一方称他为龙了,爱好是把人从屁股开始往木桩子上钉到钉穿,最多一次钉死了2万人。
于是江格尔可汗、格萨尔王、英雄玛纳斯率领北方骑兵来援助,Harlon是指来自北方的人,来源比较古老。
罗兰最后是援军久久不来战死的,熙德最后是中箭死的,贞德是死刑,所以最后都是fall
其他的好麻烦= =伊戈尔还有埃达和卡勒瓦拉还有摩诃婆罗多还有贝奥武甫还有吉尔加美仕
风箱残页 Zwei Where is the end?
作者:kotori426氏
This is somehow strange, not very much, but somehow weird.
The weather is worse than expected, this is reasonable, however, somehow unacceptable.
There once was a Great Britain, now a small island.
There once was a Big America, now the way has fallen.
No more Peter der Grosse to rein the borderless Siberia.
Jewish keep asking what is a Jewish Nation, so as the heirs of Ottoman Empire.
German keep silent.
Pharaoh rest forever or nothing.
After the prison of Babylonia, no hero deserve the calling of god 's nation.
Zipang lost its glorious in dream.
So Baal banished Rome, and let Pope dancing like a dog.
Semper Fi to our grand motherland, a sleeping lion, her Sino people never stop harm each other.
A tell of sage says, so read the book, may it not bringing you knowledge, nor wealth.
Reading, and know how sophisticated the world is, then you'll forgive what you should.
简析什么的已经在另一个号上写过了,不过这里还是要留底版
风箱残页 Drei Untitled Trip
作者:kotori426氏
It is determined to be a trip, now rather a trick.
The one, who always incorrectlly known as godness, is asking who you are.
I am Atonwind, son of Marx Weber, came from No Mans Land, in the trip of self-finding, reaching to The Middle of Nowhere.
This tall young man answered respectlly.
Good, says the goddess, then, there shall be no blessing, for you for good.
Testment, Semper Fi.
When asking how to be a man.
To be a man should have mercy, one shall know life.
Then a man should have family, one shall know love.
That is all.
A saying from Mentor of Megnir.
What about one who lost qualification to love, one do not deserve to love, to be love.
Well, says the The Moon Guardian, sorrows in your era, including a lady won't share any joy when rising a child made by her flesh, blood and bones.
You still manage to try, or to trip.
Yes, trip is good, trip is valuable, trip is priceless, trip will give you answer.
The Mars Disciple is with me, The Saturn Protector is with me, they are trying to reaching for the sun, and the sun is always set at The Middle of Nowhere.
They told me another way, as you cannot be a man, you still have your fate, a pilgrim could die as a martyr, even a beast could die like a king.
I met the Apostle of Avarice on the path.
315春假出去玩的时候,临行前写的,也是一篇没有写完的故事
大意是:
来自无人之地的高个子年轻人本是要出门远行前往荒野,寻找自我,于是神说那你不需要祝福,这样也对你好。
然后回忆导师关于如何做人的指导,导师说首先人要仁慈,要懂生命,其次要有家庭,要懂得爱。
然后年轻人问,如果一个人没有资格去爱、被爱呢?
哲师说这事情不是你的错,这是个连女性生小孩都不会为自己血肉筑成的生命而感到喜悦的时代,你应该去旅行。
然后遇到了同是前往荒野的使徒和守卫,三人同行,他们告诉年轻人如果不能成为真正的人,你也可以选择其他的命运,朝圣者可以殉道,即使是野兽也能像王一般死去。
然后我在途中遇到了逐利者……
后面我就睡觉了,第二天去了费城
风箱残页 Vier Song for Amerika
作者:kotori426氏
Pride in our community, glorious for our king;
In the middle of nowhere, an ideal land found;
Successed scars for ages, bards were banished;
Fears gloomy after decades, the first time relieved.
Sire, don'ya believe humble wordz, or dishlike ancient tone?
If thou generous allowed, lemme finish a tale.
Sunshine last for centuries, times empire reign rotate;
Moonrise still hundreds years, men are always stand;
Dukes fear their king, parted lands marquess acquired;
Earl rule the county, baron have unique townhold.
Bu' sire, you gain no more than a gen'leman;
Why not pu' your nothing down, and se'hle to share other freedom?
Past the sunset twilight, stars twinkle all night;
Lights descendant from sol, moonlight pales'star curtain;
People die after born, grand but never fade;
Civils live for life, tax grace never paied.
————————————————————————
Thanks to the hinghking, we settle new world;
May our god blessed, here's new summerland;
In spring we rise, in summer we stand;
Autumn makes we bow, snow falls we slept
Thrived with vigorous miracle, robust sturdy race built;
Freedom we are named, redeemer we should be;
If here is not the center for the world;
It would be the corner of the erathland;
虽然没写完【按惯例我也不会写完】,不过这次算是完成度最高的一首了,构思到后面的时候根据感觉起名叫“阿美丽家之歌”。
4个词一短句,8个词一行,4行一段
然后既要保持一定的押韵,还要注意句子尾部的韵脚……为此还调换了几句语序和词序
说到修辞手法,噗噗噗,倒是使用了对比、比喻、排比、对偶之类的,虽然想回环和顶真,不过又有点顾忌英文里重复使用的单词
大致意思
就是我们原先过得不好,后来过上了美国梦式的生活
先生你愿不愿意听听我给讲
话说太阳东升西落、月光照耀大地已由百年,王朝倾覆,而人类却一直立于大地之上。王下有诸侯、诸侯分大夫,最小的爵也有个城
但是先生,你的收入还没有乡绅多,干嘛不抛弃你那等同于一无所有,同我们一起来逍遥快活。
这不,日落西沉,星光遍地。待到月圆之夜,又有月明星稀。人生在世,挣扎求生,但你看那世间奇伟,它不用交税啊。
——————————————————————————
后来我们搬到了新大陆,这地方真是世外桃源般的好
春耕夏种秋收冬眠好不快活。
于是生机蓬勃欣欣向荣野火燎原,对,我们是自由我们是救赎者(我们是世界警察)
最后一句是构思之前就想写的——如果这里(阿美丽家)不是世界的中心,那它就是世界的角落
风箱残页 Null Masue the Atonwind
作者:kotori426氏
I am Masue the Atonwind,
named after a gust of Wind from Ancient,
elder than the Antarctic Wind.
I am the Son of Liberty,
but blessed under Miracle and Azreal,
ignored by Freedom.
Then, the Son of the Miracle baptized me and said:
The white Bear from North Welkin Glacier is your Guard.
The pale Wolves from North Ice Sheet are your Claw.
The silver Fox from North Shadow Forest agreed to be your Guide.
Then, the Wing of Azreal covered me and said:
Let the Greatest Death of all forget where are you, now and then, here and there.
Let the Only Almighty of all forget Who you are, and What are you.
Let the Paramount Justice of all forget any good from you, so as evil.
风箱残页 Eins
作者:kotori426氏
Into the deep of winter,
time was frozen and struggling for spring,
however someone is needed to help this out.
So wake the Kin up,
second son of sun.
Morning mist sprinkle to grab the shadow of moon,
pale fire flickering to stay hunter's dream.
Rhode from the middle land show his disagree,
this naysayer says:
how can a second son got the bless of our sacred pure devine,
he may murder his brother, yes, he will.
So wake the Kin up,
in the name of our holy diety,
he shall covered with fleur-de-lis et angelos,
he shall be blessed with deus ex machina,
he shall long live in the auld lane syne,
such ineffable,
so wonderful,
much promising,
many glourious.
Aaron the grand and the first priest show his pros,
aye, this agent of god belive this is the high time to open an enlightened era.
...
...
Saharie Natsurita.
When season rotate, wind brings greetings, birdie carries gift.
I come from the future, thou remembered me up of past, soak into euphoria is second to omega.
...
...
Into the war, into the epic.
The man with a ring on his finger rise to protest, he is known as the dragon slayer from northland,
how dare you libel our belief, you nasty hectic shalt die seventy-seven times,
Das Nidelungenlied and their troops won't let you go.
Then the Tepes let 500 people die,
then the Tepes let 20,000 people die.
Me, the first son of Vald the dragon, shall fight you to death.
Our allies is under siege, troops should be mobilize!
Khan Jangar, King Gassar and Hero Manas, three of Harlon from North of Eastland ride there troops, strongest in the world, to fight.
Roland waive his Durandal, though he shall fight with enemy more than ten times of his and fall.
El Cid the Lord Protector stand back of him, though he shall get an arrow and fall.
Jeanne d'Arc is brave and unstoppable, though she shall sentense to death and fall.
...
...
有一天去沃尔玛的路上想到的……不过只能回忆起一小部分。不过既然这个系列都叫风箱残页了,没写完应该没什么问题吧= =毕竟写一半跑题了。
大意是世道混乱,下一个时代亟待来临,所以让Kin醒来吧,因为是次子,所以是小王Kin(g),如果写成Regios会不会太……虽然已经非常那啥了。
于是来自中土的Rhode表示反对,次子接收神的祝福什么的,会让人想起亚伯与该隐嘛。
后面的fleur-de-lis之类的是罗列法语、拉丁语和苏格兰语……表现友方势力,与第二部分对应。
然后Aaron是旧约里的第一任祭祀了,换句话说是代行者,但是旧约毕竟是美索不达米亚地区的神话,原型是Baal神,所以只是地区战争的引线。
第二部分首先是德国的尼伯龙根,屠龙者,异教徒斩杀七十个七次是套用耶稣的话了,因为原谅人要原谅70个7次,无法原谅的话就杀。
Tepes是罗马尼亚的Vald公,认为他是英雄的一方称他为龙了,爱好是把人从屁股开始往木桩子上钉到钉穿,最多一次钉死了2万人。
于是江格尔可汗、格萨尔王、英雄玛纳斯率领北方骑兵来援助,Harlon是指来自北方的人,来源比较古老。
罗兰最后是援军久久不来战死的,熙德最后是中箭死的,贞德是死刑,所以最后都是fall
其他的好麻烦= =伊戈尔还有埃达和卡勒瓦拉还有摩诃婆罗多还有贝奥武甫还有吉尔加美仕
风箱残页 Zwei Where is the end?
作者:kotori426氏
This is somehow strange, not very much, but somehow weird.
The weather is worse than expected, this is reasonable, however, somehow unacceptable.
There once was a Great Britain, now a small island.
There once was a Big America, now the way has fallen.
No more Peter der Grosse to rein the borderless Siberia.
Jewish keep asking what is a Jewish Nation, so as the heirs of Ottoman Empire.
German keep silent.
Pharaoh rest forever or nothing.
After the prison of Babylonia, no hero deserve the calling of god 's nation.
Zipang lost its glorious in dream.
So Baal banished Rome, and let Pope dancing like a dog.
Semper Fi to our grand motherland, a sleeping lion, her Sino people never stop harm each other.
A tell of sage says, so read the book, may it not bringing you knowledge, nor wealth.
Reading, and know how sophisticated the world is, then you'll forgive what you should.
简析什么的已经在另一个号上写过了,不过这里还是要留底版
风箱残页 Drei Untitled Trip
作者:kotori426氏
It is determined to be a trip, now rather a trick.
The one, who always incorrectlly known as godness, is asking who you are.
I am Atonwind, son of Marx Weber, came from No Mans Land, in the trip of self-finding, reaching to The Middle of Nowhere.
This tall young man answered respectlly.
Good, says the goddess, then, there shall be no blessing, for you for good.
Testment, Semper Fi.
When asking how to be a man.
To be a man should have mercy, one shall know life.
Then a man should have family, one shall know love.
That is all.
A saying from Mentor of Megnir.
What about one who lost qualification to love, one do not deserve to love, to be love.
Well, says the The Moon Guardian, sorrows in your era, including a lady won't share any joy when rising a child made by her flesh, blood and bones.
You still manage to try, or to trip.
Yes, trip is good, trip is valuable, trip is priceless, trip will give you answer.
The Mars Disciple is with me, The Saturn Protector is with me, they are trying to reaching for the sun, and the sun is always set at The Middle of Nowhere.
They told me another way, as you cannot be a man, you still have your fate, a pilgrim could die as a martyr, even a beast could die like a king.
I met the Apostle of Avarice on the path.
315春假出去玩的时候,临行前写的,也是一篇没有写完的故事
大意是:
来自无人之地的高个子年轻人本是要出门远行前往荒野,寻找自我,于是神说那你不需要祝福,这样也对你好。
然后回忆导师关于如何做人的指导,导师说首先人要仁慈,要懂生命,其次要有家庭,要懂得爱。
然后年轻人问,如果一个人没有资格去爱、被爱呢?
哲师说这事情不是你的错,这是个连女性生小孩都不会为自己血肉筑成的生命而感到喜悦的时代,你应该去旅行。
然后遇到了同是前往荒野的使徒和守卫,三人同行,他们告诉年轻人如果不能成为真正的人,你也可以选择其他的命运,朝圣者可以殉道,即使是野兽也能像王一般死去。
然后我在途中遇到了逐利者……
后面我就睡觉了,第二天去了费城
风箱残页 Vier Song for Amerika
作者:kotori426氏
Pride in our community, glorious for our king;
In the middle of nowhere, an ideal land found;
Successed scars for ages, bards were banished;
Fears gloomy after decades, the first time relieved.
Sire, don'ya believe humble wordz, or dishlike ancient tone?
If thou generous allowed, lemme finish a tale.
Sunshine last for centuries, times empire reign rotate;
Moonrise still hundreds years, men are always stand;
Dukes fear their king, parted lands marquess acquired;
Earl rule the county, baron have unique townhold.
Bu' sire, you gain no more than a gen'leman;
Why not pu' your nothing down, and se'hle to share other freedom?
Past the sunset twilight, stars twinkle all night;
Lights descendant from sol, moonlight pales'star curtain;
People die after born, grand but never fade;
Civils live for life, tax grace never paied.
————————————————————————
Thanks to the hinghking, we settle new world;
May our god blessed, here's new summerland;
In spring we rise, in summer we stand;
Autumn makes we bow, snow falls we slept
Thrived with vigorous miracle, robust sturdy race built;
Freedom we are named, redeemer we should be;
If here is not the center for the world;
It would be the corner of the erathland;
虽然没写完【按惯例我也不会写完】,不过这次算是完成度最高的一首了,构思到后面的时候根据感觉起名叫“阿美丽家之歌”。
4个词一短句,8个词一行,4行一段
然后既要保持一定的押韵,还要注意句子尾部的韵脚……为此还调换了几句语序和词序
说到修辞手法,噗噗噗,倒是使用了对比、比喻、排比、对偶之类的,虽然想回环和顶真,不过又有点顾忌英文里重复使用的单词
大致意思
就是我们原先过得不好,后来过上了美国梦式的生活
先生你愿不愿意听听我给讲
话说太阳东升西落、月光照耀大地已由百年,王朝倾覆,而人类却一直立于大地之上。王下有诸侯、诸侯分大夫,最小的爵也有个城
但是先生,你的收入还没有乡绅多,干嘛不抛弃你那等同于一无所有,同我们一起来逍遥快活。
这不,日落西沉,星光遍地。待到月圆之夜,又有月明星稀。人生在世,挣扎求生,但你看那世间奇伟,它不用交税啊。
——————————————————————————
后来我们搬到了新大陆,这地方真是世外桃源般的好
春耕夏种秋收冬眠好不快活。
于是生机蓬勃欣欣向荣野火燎原,对,我们是自由我们是救赎者(我们是世界警察)
最后一句是构思之前就想写的——如果这里(阿美丽家)不是世界的中心,那它就是世界的角落