《Paradise Lost》剧本
用了三天时间，终于改写成剧本。第一、二幕按原著改写，第三幕直接从《旧约》上搬来，粗糙了许多。有待改进吧。
剧情简介：
第一幕：地 狱 撒旦在地狱得到消息，听说上帝要造一个新的世界，以及一个叫“人”的新物类。为反抗上帝的强权，重新赢得回到天国的机会，撒旦在地地狱召集众邪恶天使，号召他们起来反抗。各天使自报家门，出谋划策。（三个天使各自说出自己的看法：一个认为应当顺从命令；一个认为应当与上帝兵刀相见；一个认为要智取。）最后选择智取的方法，由撒旦做代表去人间打探消息。
第二幕：伊甸园 亚当夏娃在伊甸园过着纯洁无瑕的生活。两人赞赏上帝。亚当交代夏娃一件事：不可吃智慧树上的果实。此话正好被前来打探的撒旦听到。于是趁亚当不在，引诱夏娃偷食禁果。夏娃将禁果带回家中，与亚当一同分享。
第三幕：判 决 上帝宣告人类的未来的命运。人类从此被逐出伊甸园。
人物出场顺序（舞蹈编排）：
撒旦、三个邪恶天使（地狱：痛苦之舞）
亚当、夏娃（伊甸园：纯真之舞）
上帝、四小天使（欢乐之舞）
第一幕 地狱
背景：黑色石头、红色火焰、血
地狱音乐起，以邪恶天使之舞开场（时间：3分钟。撒旦+三个邪恶天使）
舞蹈停，背景音乐起（悲壮、阴森）
Satan: How miserable the life is! We are living, but no better than corpses. The bondless dark, the endless torment in the fire, and the unforgettable memories about the heaven! My buddies, do you still remember the glorious time we appreciated in the heaven? Do you still remember the happy Realm of Light?
Angel A: Sure! How can we forget? We should stay as highly as the powerful God!
Angel B: And we should be as bright as Him. All because of the unsuccessful rebellion against God, we were drawn to this horrible Abyss, no light, no happiness, and no hope!
Angle C: But is there no hope for us to rise up to the heaven again?
Satan: Good question! Just think: how fallen, how changed from our old days! All our lost is not really lost; He is not the unconquerable Will. Now we need to study how to revenge, never to yield. We have to be awake, arise, or be forever lost!
Angle C: Yes. that sounds reasonable. But how? As he has almighty power!
Satan: Quite right. That’s why I’m summing you up. You, my dear buddies, my brave comrades, if you have some good idea to revenge the God, then we would like to share it.
Angle A: Is this the Hell which we must change for the heaven? Maybe this is just a place that is suit for us. We indeed lost the light, but we got our freedom at least. We’d better not revenge, in case there would be greater punishment for us.
Angle B: What a stupid suggestion! You coward! We are just to get back what belongs to us. Let us not sleep in the dark ocean anymore! Let’s fight for our lost heaven.
Angle C: An open war is not bad. But not better than a cheat! I’ve heard there is another world, a happy place where lives some new creature called Man. He is less in power and not as excellence as the God. Maybe it is best to destroy them, for God love them best.
Satan: Yes. Man is made by clay, they must have their weakness. I would like to go there to have a look. We I get back, we decide how to attack. The journey must be long and hard. But for me, to do evil is to do good, I myself is the hell! HA HA HA…
撒旦与众邪恶天使下，第一幕完。
第二幕 伊甸园
背景：金色为主。至少两棵树（有果子），草坪、野花、石头、小动物。
音乐起。
撒旦偷偷来园内，慑手慑脚地。
Satan: What a glorious place! O sun, how I hate your bright beams. You bring me my memories from the highly heaven. The good in God is the ill in me. Now I got the chance to strike him. Poor man, we would come here to live with you or you may join us in the hell. The hell is much suit for you, it is vast enough for you to raise up your descendents. HA HA HA… How clever I am! But now, I’d better hide myself in the back of the tree, so that I can hear some secrets of Man.
说完，撒旦转身藏到大树之后。
亚当夏娃（双人舞。纯真之舞,舞蹈内容应反映智慧之果不可食。时间：不超过2分钟）
Adam: My dear, the only part of my body，do you still remember who gave us this ample world?
Eve: It’s He, my dear. Our Divine Father. He made us, gave us all power and happiness, and all liberty.
Adam: Yes. We are raised by Him from the dust. He gives us freedom, free to choose, or choose not. But there is one thing I have to repeat to you.
Eve: You have said a thousand times, my dear. We can eat fruit on any tree of the garden, except that of knowledge of good and evil.
Adam: And if we eat, we must die immediately. Keep this in your heart: no matter who you meet, what he say to you, don’t even touch that fruit!
Eve: As you are my law, my dear, I promise you, I will not break my word.
二人分开劳作。亚当下。
撒旦出场。
Satan（对观众）: I came here with wander, what is Man like. As I see, they are so gracious, so beautiful, so pure! But as I said: all good to me is evil; evil to you is my good! Now I know what they fear, I will seduce the woman to eat the fruit which is forbidden to eat. Why should their Lord forbid that? Is knowledge bad? It must not be so. God may afraid of them to equal with him. HA HAHA…what now I’m doing is to ruin the world He made for six nights and days within less than one night!
撒旦化作蛇身，心怀诡计，来到正在采花的夏娃身旁。
Satan: You fairest woman, you are the most beautiful gift made by God. Even no angle in the heaven is as bright as you.
Eve:（吃惊）You strange snake, what are you saying? Why can you speak man’s language?
Satan: Yes. I was first just as other beasts that cannot speak. But one day when I was hungry, I eat a fruit on a fantastic tree, on which the fruit the most delicious, it is the sweetest thing I’ve eaten in this garden. It gives me wisdom, and since then, I could think and speak as Man.
Eve: But of this tree we may not taste nor touch, or we will die in a minute!
Satan: Indeed? Has God said that you have all the freedom, freedom to choose or choose not? You, Qeen of this universe, do not believe the threats of death. You shall not die. The fruit of knowledge gives you knowledge, like me.
Eve: What does that mean?
Satan: How can it be sin to know good and evil? Your Lord said so, just because he don’t want you to know as much as a god. Goddess human,touch it, and freely taste.
Eve: So what the God forbids us to know good and evil is to forbid us to be wise? Then what about our inward freedom? Should I really have the freedom to choose? I so, why can’t I eat this fruit? Yeah, the fruit here is the fruit of real freedom. It is calling me, inviting my taste. I will have a taste.
(夏娃伸手摘智慧之果，并吃下。悲乐响起)
Eve: Now I can see how beautiful the nature is. I would like to sing and dance for the creatures. Because of you, my dear angle, you are my best guide, leading me to the way to wisdom.
Satan: Why don’t you take one for your man? He will be happy if you share this delicious with him.
亚当上。手持花环。
Adam: I’m making you a flower hat. Is it beautiful?
Eve: Yeah. But I also have a present for you. That is the fruit on the tree of knowledge. It is not of danger to touch and taste, it gives us wisdom.
Adam: How are you lost? Tell me how on a sudden lost, defaced? How dare you break the forbiddance, how can you defend our Lord?
Eve: If eating this will make you die, I will not let you do it. I would rather die myself, because I love you so much. But the truth is not like that. The fruit brings us knowledge, it makes our eyes more open. Believe me, a new world is awaiting us, we will have a new life.
Adam: A new life means to die. Because I love you, I would like to eat this, to die with you. How can I bear the life without you?
(亚当吃下智慧果。悲乐起。)
第三幕 上帝现身
小天使持烛火上：天使之舞。时间：3分钟
God: my dear son and daughter. How you make me despair. I made you up by the mud, from the earth, give you all the freedom. I promise you all the joy in this garden, while asked you only one thing. Is it difficult to obey this forbidden?
Adam: My Lord, the only thing we want is real freedom. It is true we will die by eating this. But without eating, how can I know the good and evil? I am not immortal any more, but also not ignorant any more.
God: What a shame to say so! As for you, devil serpent, you shall walk and speak no more. You shall go with your belly on the ground, and eat the dust all your life.
As you, the woman, you shall bear the pain of carrying children.
Now Adam, my son, because you have eaten this fruit, you shall be tortured by endless labour. There would be no food for you for free!
亚当夏娃在天使的驱逐下走出伊甸园。
剧情简介：
第一幕：地 狱 撒旦在地狱得到消息，听说上帝要造一个新的世界，以及一个叫“人”的新物类。为反抗上帝的强权，重新赢得回到天国的机会，撒旦在地地狱召集众邪恶天使，号召他们起来反抗。各天使自报家门，出谋划策。（三个天使各自说出自己的看法：一个认为应当顺从命令；一个认为应当与上帝兵刀相见；一个认为要智取。）最后选择智取的方法，由撒旦做代表去人间打探消息。
第二幕：伊甸园 亚当夏娃在伊甸园过着纯洁无瑕的生活。两人赞赏上帝。亚当交代夏娃一件事：不可吃智慧树上的果实。此话正好被前来打探的撒旦听到。于是趁亚当不在，引诱夏娃偷食禁果。夏娃将禁果带回家中，与亚当一同分享。
第三幕：判 决 上帝宣告人类的未来的命运。人类从此被逐出伊甸园。
人物出场顺序（舞蹈编排）：
撒旦、三个邪恶天使（地狱：痛苦之舞）
亚当、夏娃（伊甸园：纯真之舞）
上帝、四小天使（欢乐之舞）
第一幕 地狱
背景：黑色石头、红色火焰、血
地狱音乐起，以邪恶天使之舞开场（时间：3分钟。撒旦+三个邪恶天使）
舞蹈停，背景音乐起（悲壮、阴森）
Satan: How miserable the life is! We are living, but no better than corpses. The bondless dark, the endless torment in the fire, and the unforgettable memories about the heaven! My buddies, do you still remember the glorious time we appreciated in the heaven? Do you still remember the happy Realm of Light?
Angel A: Sure! How can we forget? We should stay as highly as the powerful God!
Angel B: And we should be as bright as Him. All because of the unsuccessful rebellion against God, we were drawn to this horrible Abyss, no light, no happiness, and no hope!
Angle C: But is there no hope for us to rise up to the heaven again?
Satan: Good question! Just think: how fallen, how changed from our old days! All our lost is not really lost; He is not the unconquerable Will. Now we need to study how to revenge, never to yield. We have to be awake, arise, or be forever lost!
Angle C: Yes. that sounds reasonable. But how? As he has almighty power!
Satan: Quite right. That’s why I’m summing you up. You, my dear buddies, my brave comrades, if you have some good idea to revenge the God, then we would like to share it.
Angle A: Is this the Hell which we must change for the heaven? Maybe this is just a place that is suit for us. We indeed lost the light, but we got our freedom at least. We’d better not revenge, in case there would be greater punishment for us.
Angle B: What a stupid suggestion! You coward! We are just to get back what belongs to us. Let us not sleep in the dark ocean anymore! Let’s fight for our lost heaven.
Angle C: An open war is not bad. But not better than a cheat! I’ve heard there is another world, a happy place where lives some new creature called Man. He is less in power and not as excellence as the God. Maybe it is best to destroy them, for God love them best.
Satan: Yes. Man is made by clay, they must have their weakness. I would like to go there to have a look. We I get back, we decide how to attack. The journey must be long and hard. But for me, to do evil is to do good, I myself is the hell! HA HA HA…
撒旦与众邪恶天使下，第一幕完。
第二幕 伊甸园
背景：金色为主。至少两棵树（有果子），草坪、野花、石头、小动物。
音乐起。
撒旦偷偷来园内，慑手慑脚地。
Satan: What a glorious place! O sun, how I hate your bright beams. You bring me my memories from the highly heaven. The good in God is the ill in me. Now I got the chance to strike him. Poor man, we would come here to live with you or you may join us in the hell. The hell is much suit for you, it is vast enough for you to raise up your descendents. HA HA HA… How clever I am! But now, I’d better hide myself in the back of the tree, so that I can hear some secrets of Man.
说完，撒旦转身藏到大树之后。
亚当夏娃（双人舞。纯真之舞,舞蹈内容应反映智慧之果不可食。时间：不超过2分钟）
Adam: My dear, the only part of my body，do you still remember who gave us this ample world?
Eve: It’s He, my dear. Our Divine Father. He made us, gave us all power and happiness, and all liberty.
Adam: Yes. We are raised by Him from the dust. He gives us freedom, free to choose, or choose not. But there is one thing I have to repeat to you.
Eve: You have said a thousand times, my dear. We can eat fruit on any tree of the garden, except that of knowledge of good and evil.
Adam: And if we eat, we must die immediately. Keep this in your heart: no matter who you meet, what he say to you, don’t even touch that fruit!
Eve: As you are my law, my dear, I promise you, I will not break my word.
二人分开劳作。亚当下。
撒旦出场。
Satan（对观众）: I came here with wander, what is Man like. As I see, they are so gracious, so beautiful, so pure! But as I said: all good to me is evil; evil to you is my good! Now I know what they fear, I will seduce the woman to eat the fruit which is forbidden to eat. Why should their Lord forbid that? Is knowledge bad? It must not be so. God may afraid of them to equal with him. HA HAHA…what now I’m doing is to ruin the world He made for six nights and days within less than one night!
撒旦化作蛇身，心怀诡计，来到正在采花的夏娃身旁。
Satan: You fairest woman, you are the most beautiful gift made by God. Even no angle in the heaven is as bright as you.
Eve:（吃惊）You strange snake, what are you saying? Why can you speak man’s language?
Satan: Yes. I was first just as other beasts that cannot speak. But one day when I was hungry, I eat a fruit on a fantastic tree, on which the fruit the most delicious, it is the sweetest thing I’ve eaten in this garden. It gives me wisdom, and since then, I could think and speak as Man.
Eve: But of this tree we may not taste nor touch, or we will die in a minute!
Satan: Indeed? Has God said that you have all the freedom, freedom to choose or choose not? You, Qeen of this universe, do not believe the threats of death. You shall not die. The fruit of knowledge gives you knowledge, like me.
Eve: What does that mean?
Satan: How can it be sin to know good and evil? Your Lord said so, just because he don’t want you to know as much as a god. Goddess human,touch it, and freely taste.
Eve: So what the God forbids us to know good and evil is to forbid us to be wise? Then what about our inward freedom? Should I really have the freedom to choose? I so, why can’t I eat this fruit? Yeah, the fruit here is the fruit of real freedom. It is calling me, inviting my taste. I will have a taste.
(夏娃伸手摘智慧之果，并吃下。悲乐响起)
Eve: Now I can see how beautiful the nature is. I would like to sing and dance for the creatures. Because of you, my dear angle, you are my best guide, leading me to the way to wisdom.
Satan: Why don’t you take one for your man? He will be happy if you share this delicious with him.
亚当上。手持花环。
Adam: I’m making you a flower hat. Is it beautiful?
Eve: Yeah. But I also have a present for you. That is the fruit on the tree of knowledge. It is not of danger to touch and taste, it gives us wisdom.
Adam: How are you lost? Tell me how on a sudden lost, defaced? How dare you break the forbiddance, how can you defend our Lord?
Eve: If eating this will make you die, I will not let you do it. I would rather die myself, because I love you so much. But the truth is not like that. The fruit brings us knowledge, it makes our eyes more open. Believe me, a new world is awaiting us, we will have a new life.
Adam: A new life means to die. Because I love you, I would like to eat this, to die with you. How can I bear the life without you?
(亚当吃下智慧果。悲乐起。)
第三幕 上帝现身
小天使持烛火上：天使之舞。时间：3分钟
God: my dear son and daughter. How you make me despair. I made you up by the mud, from the earth, give you all the freedom. I promise you all the joy in this garden, while asked you only one thing. Is it difficult to obey this forbidden?
Adam: My Lord, the only thing we want is real freedom. It is true we will die by eating this. But without eating, how can I know the good and evil? I am not immortal any more, but also not ignorant any more.
God: What a shame to say so! As for you, devil serpent, you shall walk and speak no more. You shall go with your belly on the ground, and eat the dust all your life.
As you, the woman, you shall bear the pain of carrying children.
Now Adam, my son, because you have eaten this fruit, you shall be tortured by endless labour. There would be no food for you for free!
亚当夏娃在天使的驱逐下走出伊甸园。
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