韻腳
十里平湖霜滿天,
寸寸青絲愁華年.
對月形單望相護,
祗羨鴛鴦不羨僊.
so this is 對押韻的堅持??? 平仄不對啊, 官人~~ or this is a 古風?
anyway, it's a beautiful poem and i love it, thank Sie~~~
願作鴛鴦不羨僊 is not as good as 祗羨鴛鴦不羨僊.
one more year?? 真是晴天霹靂呀.
i would love o be crucified like Jesus rather than suffering my whole lie like this. except for Ihr music, 我的生命毫無任何樂趣可言.
寸寸青絲愁華年.
對月形單望相護,
祗羨鴛鴦不羨僊.
so this is 對押韻的堅持??? 平仄不對啊, 官人~~ or this is a 古風?
anyway, it's a beautiful poem and i love it, thank Sie~~~
願作鴛鴦不羨僊 is not as good as 祗羨鴛鴦不羨僊.
one more year?? 真是晴天霹靂呀.
i would love o be crucified like Jesus rather than suffering my whole lie like this. except for Ihr music, 我的生命毫無任何樂趣可言.
