【如何阅读,如何写作:学术类】

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2009-06-22 07:33:20 来自: .

这年头,似乎谁都能读能写;可是,真正会读会写的又有多少人呢?
我承认,断章取义的读、自由发散的读、鹦鹉学舌的读、曲解原意的读都是读。同理,所谓的写作自然少不了形形色色的胡言乱语。
发起这个讨论,是想得到朋友的意见和支持,在明确并试图继续完善特定领域里的阅读和写作规范的同时,也想抛砖引玉,期待更多的人来谈其他类型的读与写。
我不敢自称学者,只是做了很多年学生,也矢志为自己的学生负责。所以,底下给出的,是学术阅读和写作训练的具体提示,针对面是本科学生。英文版摘自某师姐的syllabus,中文版是我的进一步整理。
如果有人对文艺作品的细读感兴趣,我们可以另行开帖讨论。
如果有其他行业的朋友(诸如创作、出版、媒体等)愿意发言谈读写,也请另行开贴讨论。


阅读提要:

1. 关注细节:
a. 标题、副标题; 作者信息、推荐语
b. 关键词、生僻词
c. 脚注、书目、索引

2. 把握结构:
a. 前言、序、目录
b. 句子、段落、章节、全文乃至全书的逻辑结构

3. 积极笔记:
a. 随书笔记(备注、记号笔、彩条)
b. 阅读报告(具体信息、整体论点、个人意见)

写作提要:

1. 相关性
a. 写作时清晰表达本文的问题、观点、论据
b. 明确本文价值何在,所用材料意义何在

2. 准确度
a. 用自己的语言准确复述并解释所阅读材料中的观点
b. 运用所阅读的材料来支持/反对他人观点并建立自己的观点

3. 逻辑性
a. 论点鲜明,表达直接明确
b. 论据起到实际的支持作用,论证过程有条不紊
c. 语法正确,词汇至少达到本科应有程度,学会应用阅读中接触到的关键词
d. 每个段落都围绕特定主题,段落与段落之间有清晰的逻辑关系,所有段落构成有机整体

4. 深度与广度
a. 准确把握所阅读材料中的前设、设定、和含义
b. 指出所阅读材料中的复杂性、缺陷,提出自己的问题
c. 学会自行检索、运用相关材料
d. 客观看待、思考并评估不同观点

On Reading: Some General Guidelines

Here are some steps to follow in making sense of the assigned reading, some of which may be difficult:
1. Note titles and subtitles. Titles and subtitles are carefully chosen by an author to express the unifying theme of the work of the whole, so it is likely to give you important information about the author’s intent. Analyze the title word by word: Why did the author choose the call the work by that particular title? What does it mean?
2. Note “blurbs.” If you copy of the text has comments on the cover or flaps, they can be useful in identifying the book’s thesis and/or significance. Look also for other clues like the author’s perspective, area of expertise, and purpose.
3. Note table of contents. This can be one of your most important tools in understanding a book. A table of contents is much like an outline, providing the structure of the book as a whole. In general, if you flesh out the meaning of the topics listed in the table of contents, you will have gone far in understanding the argument of the book. You might consider making notes next to the table of contents, giving greater detail about the contents of particular chapters and subheadings listed there.
4. Note preface and introduction. Prefaces and introductions are designed by the author to prepare you to understand the work to follow, so pay very close attention to them. Often the author will use the preface and introduction to situate herself (within disciplinary boundaries, in relation to broader theoretical concerns, in relation to specific thinkers, etc). A preface might contain a narrative as to how this particular work came to take the shape it does. It may discuss issues of method: how will the author support her thesis? What will count as evidence? How will it be analyzed? This is often a good place to discover what will not be examined in the book, what will not count as evidence, what kinds of questions will not be asked.
5. Think structurally. As mentioned above under “table of contents” each and every book, article, piece of music, artwork, etc. has a structure through which it conveys its message. When reading, you will be richly rewarded by paying attention to structure. Note the overall structure of the work, the ways in which it is organized. A book is divided into chapters, which break down the general subject of the book into subtopics. Chapters might be divided by subheadings, which help to organize the information within them. Within these chapters (with or without subheadings) are paragraphs, themselves made up of sentences, themselves made of words. If a work does not “make sense” to you, it is usually because you have not (yet) understood the relationship between these constituent parts. If a particular reading is particularly troublesome, begin at the level of the sentence, with your list of key terms (see below) and a dictionary in hand, and begin to piece together the meaning of the sentence, word by word. If you can’t figure out the subject of a sentence or paragraph, identify the nouns and the verbs, using the structures of grammar to help you.
6. Identify, and define, key terms. Which words are central to the author’s argument? Which does she take the time to define for you? If a term is used over and over again, is it used the same way throughout? What seems to be at stake in the particular usage of this term? Carefully note these key terms, both in the author’s own terms, and then in your own words. As the course progresses, you may find that certain terms are common to many of our readings. How do different author use them differently? What is at stake in those differences? In addition to key terms, you are responsible for looking up any words with which you are unfamiliar; if you don’t know the meaning of the words in a sentence, you cannot understand that sentence, or the paragraph of which it is a part, or the chapter of which it is a part, or the book of which it is a part.
7. Note footnotes or endnotes. Those little numbers suspended at the end of a line? They often lead you to very important information. They might contain ideas marginal to the argument of the work at hand, but extremely interesting to you or to our work in this course. They will also tell you which sources the author has relied upon in constructing his or her own work. Those of you new to these fields of inquiry might not recognize those sources, and so they might hold little significance for you, but the work of any scholar, including yourself, is only as good as his or her sources, and a scholar who uses poor sources has poor credibility.
8. Take notes. Different people have different strategies for note-taking. Some recommend using marginal notes, written in the book. I generally take careful notes in a notebook, as the very act of writing helps me to better comprehend what I am reading. Take notes about key terms, as mentioned above. Take notes about pieces of evidence used by the author to support her claims. Note page numbers, so you will be able to find the relevant passages when you wish to return to them later. You might consider making an outline of the argument of the book or article; is it coherent, i.e., do the ideas relate to one another in a way that is logical and produces a unified whole? I always try to write at least a full paragraph immediately upon fishing a book or an article, with my immediate impression about the author’s thesis, how well I felt she supported it, any weak places in the argument, etc.


On Writing: Standards for Evaluation
Below are the criteria, I, and you, will be using to evaluate your work:
1. Clarify and Logic.
a. Your sentences are grammatically correct and express your ideas as directly as possible.
b. Each of your paragraph is organized around a single, identifiable theme.
c. Your positions can be supported with appropriate evidence and sound reasoning.
d. Your writing uses appropriate language, including college-level vocabulary and “key terms” used by the author.
e. The parts of your assignment are related to one another in a coherent way, together forming a unified whole.
2. Accuracy.
a. Using your own words, you correctly describe or explain what the author is saying.
b. You include evidence from the work to demonstrate your reliability in conveying the author’s position.
3. Relevance.
a. You can identify the most important problem, idea, or piece of evidence for the task at hand.
b. You can identify and express the overall value or importance of the material.
4. Depth and Breadth.
a. You can identify assumptions, presuppositions, and implications of the material.
b. You can address complexities, ask questions, identify (if not resolve) problems in the material.
c. You can draw broadly from relevant sources, even beyond the material in question.
d. You can draw broadly on different points of view, and given them serious and balanced consideration.

  • 王敖

    2009-06-22 08:18:35 王敖 (屠刀帮)

    有本书叫Simple and Direct, 雅克·巴赞写的,可供参考。

  • 七荷叶

    2009-06-22 08:53:32 七荷叶

    这个是我的一门历史写作课对作业的具体要求(一部分作业为informal writings,贴出来的是formal writings的部分):

    Formal Writings:

    These four assignments represent different kinds of writing exercise with different goals.

    a. Summary. Summarizing a text is a rudimentary form of writing, but it is essential for effective writing, because it lays the foundation for good interpretation, comparison, and analysis. The summary assignment requires you to provide an account of the author’s central argument, evidence, and the significance of the work in the field. You will work particularly on conciseness and clarity in this assignment.

    b. Essay on concepts. History writing employs many analytical concepts, but it also analyzes the concept of “history” itself: What counts as “history” and why so? What is not “history?” Who gets to decide what can be written in history and as history? Can we use myths and fictions to write history? This essay will answer these questions by drawing upon scholarship on [our course topic]. You will focus on improving effective expression, cohesiveness, and organization of a paper.

    c. Literature review. Literature review is a very important genre of writing in all academic fields. Here “literature” refers to published research, not to poems and novels. The term “review” means that you survey others’ ideas. A review “presents an organized account of the current state of knowledge in a specific area” and can be a subsection within a research project. This assignment requires you to review several articles on [one important concept discussed in this course]. You will work on accurate summary and presentation. It will help you gradually build your final project.

    d. The final project is either a review essay on [our course topic] or a movie review. The review essay could be based on the literature review but should integrate more materials, and cite some primary sources to emphasize or question some of the scholarship under review. The movie review should have a main argument about the movie (themes should be discussed with the instructor) and cite scholarship on [our course topic] (and primary sources if necessary) to support your main argument.

    More detailed requirements of these assignments can be found in the weekly sections. The first draft of these formal writings will be read by both your peers and the instructor. You will revise them into polished essays with the help of our feedbacks. The instructor will give mini-lectures on writing and distribute handouts about style, citation, transition, grammar, etc. We strongly encourage you to take advantage of the resources at the Sweetland Writing Center.

    (Your formal writings should use Times New Roman 12, double-spaced. You are encouraged to print them out double-sided.)

  • 察邬次仁

    2009-06-22 09:25:10 察邬次仁 (S.T.A.L.K.E.R.)

    学习@-@…

  • .

    2009-06-22 09:32:21 .

    这个程度比较高了,writing course。
      survey course能逼着小孩做填空题就不错了。我打算以后每周发个填空单子,让他们对着书找答案去。
      然后到了研究生阶段就该逼着他们写书评了,那个很训练人,千字之内要复述要评价最好还有点小议论。

  • 七荷叶

    2009-06-22 09:51:58 七荷叶

    这个writing course的要求是给大学一年级孩子的,四年级要比这个要求高。

  • YING.

    2009-06-22 09:54:47 YING.

    这个话题很难讨论哪。上述是最起码的guidelines,可以防范态度性的、原则性的错误,但要教怎么做得好,比如说怎样解读、评析、立论、筛选综合、融会阐释,那就难了...

  • .

    2009-06-22 12:34:54 .

    傅红雪同学练功只练拔刀。
    能把guidelines里面的基本功练好是最不容易的。
    大家埋头苦练去吧,废话少说:)

  • 小古董

    2009-06-22 12:39:09 小古董 (举轻若重)

    !!!听课。

  • 小寒

    2009-06-22 13:18:23 小寒

    搬板凳!学习中…………

  • Allien|Exodus

    2009-06-22 13:24:01 Allien|Exodus (垂杨紫陌洛城东)

    我上学时候看paper(理科的),
    1.看题目,摘要(一般摘要里都能把实验设计说的清楚的),关键词(有的关键词设置很古怪)
    2.看图表(我个人读图能力比读数能力好,图表都有的时候,我就先看图。然后看图注,或者表注),一般还会有文字形式的对数据的说明。
    3.然后看背景和讨论。其实好多二流paper都满足于呈现results。在discussion的部分相对比较薄弱。不过考虑到专业领域狭窄,要同时兼顾深度和广度并不容易。
    4.特别感兴趣的,会回头去看实验设计步骤。(有的实验设计真的好聪明!)

    自己写thesis的时候,我个人觉得重要的是:
    1.目的,实验目的(涉及到选题和研究背景),自己预设的假说,实验的目的是验证,肯定或者否定;这也是thesis的主题。
    2.围绕实验目的的实验设计(实验设计很见功力,我做耗子的,耗子是活的,有自己的生命周期/生物材料的保存周期/所用实验方法对生物的需求/整个的实验周期和时间分配;我也是活的,设计实验的时候,还得考虑自己的体力精力)设计尽求合理,高效,紧凑,能揭示问题。写实验方法的时候,尽求体现出实验设计的逻辑。
    3,结果。这个一般都是跟实验设计对应的。(其实一般的paper,结果都是有选择的呈现的,这样势必实验设计也得有选择呈现的;选择之后很可能体现不出起先设计时候的逻辑,这就要求写作者的选择必须得当!)呈现的结果也是为了肯定或否定开始的假说(为其提供证据,支持或者推翻,一般肯定的居多),总是都是为了目的服务,也就是为thesis的主题服务。
    4,讨论。讨论的重点放在对主题的验证。怎么支持或者推翻?为什么会有这样的结果(寻找相关的文献证据阐释 为什么,这是难做的一步,要寻找最有力的文献证据);这样的结果对领域发展可能的贡献(横向和纵向,其实如今学科分工很细,要能举一反三,与相同相近相关领域的东西联系起来,实在很不容易,要具备这样的眼力,要做足许多功课,绝对体力活!所以一般就联系相同领域的啦)

    当然,我只是学术流水线上的半成品,而且这种半成品状态还将继续若干年。。。
    不过你们似乎都是文科生~俺没受过专业文科训练……提供一点理科经验,仅供参考。

  • Allien|Exodus

    2009-06-22 13:34:59 Allien|Exodus (垂杨紫陌洛城东)

    傅红雪出刀的要诀“快”。

    出快刀一招制胜真的要很多很多基本功呢……

  • 2009-06-22 15:19:53 安冬霓

    【其实好多二流paper都满足于呈现results。在discussion的部分相对比较薄弱】
    这个说的好:)

  • 荷包蛋

    2009-07-23 08:17:33 荷包蛋 (我想做饭做衣服做家具盖房子……)

    中国的大学教育好像对如何写作学术类文章并没有专门的教育

  • 痴儿猫

    2009-10-21 12:39:48 痴儿猫 (我看过竹子公主!)

    耶,我现在就按这套读要用上的那些书,真实用啊!


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